I don't normally like dark stories like the beginning of firewing was to depressing and Sunrise from warriors should have bin darker

Wow this story was really great! Please write more!

It was good, and I liked the bit about Terra (I think I remember their names alright--the murdered newborn was Aeolus, right?)

Anyway, Terra probably would have tried to stop them, that makes sense. I liked all the perspectives (even if it was mainly from Aeolus's POV you included others' speech and expressions and stuff).
It's still sad about Aeolus, and even more so that you wrote he was so close to his family and friends but they couldn't hear him 'cause of that creepy chorus.

Hay, I like your story so far its vary...addictive =p i would like to read more please update more!