I'm liking this story very much. :) Please continue with this story and keep it up!

As far as chapter 5 is concerned, though, there seems to be a huge continuity error if this is intended to fit in with the broadcast version of V:TFB. The event at the LA Med Center actually occurs before Ham and Chris find the LA resistance. Unless this story is intended to be an embellishment of the broadcast version of the story, of course, the events in your story will seem to be disjointed with the story as everyone knows it.

Good luck, and great work! :)

I dearly love what you're doing with Ham, and Angela completely fits - can't wait to read more of her story. The pace of this feels right as well.

I know I've said before that I envy your knack of dropping OC's seamlessly into established worlds...but it bears repeating.

So glad you opted to continue. I've decided not to look up any of new info on wiki --sticking just with what you told me about it -- and read like it's a novel I've never heard of. (Unless, of course, I get hopelessly lost. Then, I might have to look at the map.)

I like how you've captured the simultaneous strangeness and familiarity between the people, and the day to day, hour to hour -ness of it all for Angie. Love how she takes out the KGB guy!

Thanks for the update.

Liz