I really love the idea. It's good to look imside Poppy's mind and feel what she is feeling. Contratulations, and praise on a job well done. Keep up the good work.

And by the way, just so that this story could be a little beter, your grammar is a little poor in places, like when 'I' turns into 'She'... you could change that... but it's up to you.

Otherwise i Loved your story. And keep writing.

Regards,

Maira

well i could see exactly how poppy feels for the fire scene

So accurate to the film, and really interesting to get inside of Poppy's head and see what she was feeling at that time. Thanks for writing this, and keep the cookie... YOU deserve it XD x

you deserve a cookie for writing this tis very good. :)

This is good! ]

I think you did the scene really well

xx

oh, goodness.

very creative :D

hahahaha,

it was really good.

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cookie please?

:D

I liked it. I want my cookie now!