|Reviews for Leave Out All The Rest|
| Levade 7/9/11 . chapter 1
You tell a great story, but please? Get a really good beta to read and correct story errors that kick the reader out of what you're telling because then you'd be an awesome writer.
Also, you can't talk when you're on a ventilator. We stick a tube down the throat and intubation inhibits the ability to speak. Change it to she's on oxygen, and she would be free to speak.
Sorry to pick the nits, but you have talent and could be even better with a bit more attention to details. :)
| The Sneezing Panda 3/19/11 . chapter 1
Aw, man. This made me cry. And I can barely remember the last time a fix made me cry.
I swear I cried on my keyboard, and I am damn certain my makeup is all ruined now, but it was well worth the read. Great fic; amazing, to say the least. :)
| ufc91 2/26/09 . chapter 1
Well, shesh, you made me cry! This was a lovely fic. You did a wonderful job capturing Kim and Tommy and the chemsitry between them that makes them so great together.
| lorli810 1/9/09 . chapter 1
I loved it. You finally made me cry! Absolutely beautiful, Shawn.
| Be A Warrior Casseau 1/9/09 . chapter 1
Thank you-I needed a good cry. That was beautifully written and my heart was breaking for poor Tommy. Great job!
| Pink-Green-White-4ever 1/9/09 . chapter 1
what can I say that I didn't when you first sent me the rough draft? There's so much emotion in this piece. It literally comes to life for us all.
I started crying with the first word and continued long after the last. Here's a character that we all know and loved, and she's facing something utterly real, so utterly human, after having lived such an extraordinary life. She's always seemed so invincible, even with the loss of her powers, but here, you've given her something to fight that she will not triumph over. Real life is like that sometimes; nobody wins every battle, and sometimes, even when it's the biggest battle of our lives, we fight it but we do not win. And yet, she's reached a level of maturity and understanding and acceptance that few adults who've lived two, three and four times longer than she had in this piece ever do. She's accepted and come to terms with the wonderful life she lived, the people she loved and lost, and is ready for when her time comes.
It's such a wonderful piece, Shawn, one that crosses boundaries and manages to touch everyone in some way. And the fact that she and Tommy had their final goodbye, that she made peace with him as well, that says something. Great job!
| Pinkie8 1/9/09 . chapter 1
Wow...this story was so wonderful and so sad. As someone who knows a person with a brain tumor this story was so real and the emotions portrayed were perfect. I am still crying as I write this...this story was excellent!
| Falcon4Crane 1/9/09 . chapter 1
this story made me cry and sometimes that hard to do but if ever i had to say goodbye to one of my favorite characters this would be the way. perfect and peaceful no fights just the calm and i know that kim would accept her fate after fighting and i know that kim wold not want tommy to see her again like that. very good story
| Thornspike 1/9/09 . chapter 1
I didn't get the last request... T.T
| JasonLeeScottFan 1/9/09 . chapter 1
This is so sad! What was Kim's final request to Tommy?
| grits 1/9/09 . chapter 1
That was so sad, I am chocked up and don't know what to say
| intersects 1/9/09 . chapter 1
If it's your intention to make everyone cry, I think you've succeeded, or at least for this one! The raw emotions really got to me. I can't figure out what the special request is, though! If it's something really obvious I'm going to knock my head on the wall, haha. But great job as always, Shawn, and I'm looking forward to reading new stuff from you!
| CathyD 1/8/09 . chapter 1
Awesome as always Shawn! Love it! Thank you so much for the amazing fic, it's exactly what I hoped for with that prompt. :)
Better feedback is at the board, but I just had to say something here as well.
| LeosGurl876 1/8/09 . chapter 1
really beautifully written. made me cry. i love your writing. i hope you continue glory days and comes the darkness soon!
just a quick question if you could answer for me, what was the request kim made to tommy that was so personal and that she only wanted tommy to do for her... i dunno if i just didnt get it or didnt read between the lines. if you could answer for me that would be great
| rose19586 1/8/09 . chapter 1
OMG! That was so saD! You made me cry! But it was really sweet and beautiful!