This is really sad and dark... *sob* But everybody would probably have told you that. It's good though, aside from some grammar mistakes.

ya'kno its stories like this that really get u thinking about what the meaning of life is. no matter the odds u can never give up. i think this is realli powerful.. its only 3 paras but its enough to make me cry. definitely one of the best fics out there, i love u for it man. keep up the good work

- *crying*

.. It is so depressing.

.. How could u kill them?

.. * gets on floor like Noa n starts cryin'*

omg this is a really really good story.. a little on the short side but new chapter? yesh? yesh.

Oh geez... this was so sad & depressing, the game was sad enough, just had to make an even sadder ending, didn't ya? I like this line though: "Cort's eyes light up like a slot machine at Sol"... LoL! I liked this story though, especially the ending. It made me feel the exact same way I felt at the end of the game itself... great job!

WWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! That story was so sad! I loved it still. I just can't picture Noa dead. (Gala and Mei I can, but no way could I picture Vahn _) There were some grammar mistakes, but I could figure out what it meant. Write more!

*sniff* Ohmigod! This is sad!

Ooh geez, those poor people go through all that and then die off of plague? ( Very dark future you predicted here. I liked the touches about Cort and Vahn, how he became a cute kid, and the flowers for Noa's grave... but I think I would like to see more about this mysterious plague! Our heroes (or hero, now x) should go investigate... I think that would be an interseting story... Cort could be a hero this time around instead of a villain! Something like that. Oh well, just a last note, you might want to watch your verb tenses and try to either put it all in past tense or present. That's really the only thing wrong with this fic. :)

that was so sweet but kinda sad but good

depressing

That was sad. But it was good, I liked it. Why'd ya have ta kill Noa? She's so cool...

*sniff* sad

Aww that was so sweet! If i gave it a letter grade, you would get a "B"

I loved it, but you're going to have ta work on your grammar.

short and sweet, although having grammatical errors...good concept...