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PhoenixDivine
2009-11-10 . chapter 7
I don't think I've ever commented on this one. Which is a shame. What you have done here in this fic is rather remarkable in the fact that I, quite literally, haven't read anything like it. The originality in the plot and characterization is, for lack of a better word, brilliant.

I mean, the Drarry scenes are utterly delectable, as always. I have been reading fan fiction for about, oh...9 years-ish I'd say? And you are *the* most consistent author I've had the pleasure to read. That being said, one almost doesn't need to comment on the Drarry, because with you, it's bound to be fabulous. What's *that* about, eh? (^.~)

Anywhoozle, about the plot. I just had a question. So, in the end, did Draco and Harry *trade* magic, or did it like...blend together? I kind of thought from the way you described it that they smooshed together into, like, one communal magical font, but then in the end you made the comment about Draco's Hawthorn being easier to use than Harry's own wand "anyway" and I thought..now wait a minute!! lol Just curious. :)
kerplank
2009-11-09 . chapter 7
Fantastic. I was looking for a good fic before I went to bed, and I found one!
luukaa
2009-11-06 . chapter 7
“And why didn’t you tell me I was in love with him?" Bloody briliant :D:D:D
chickin'SOUP
2009-09-21 . chapter 7
mm... this was an absolute pleasure to read!
yducky
2009-09-20 . chapter 7
It was so good! Cute and amazing in every way!
yducky
2009-09-20 . chapter 2
It's been cute so far! At first, I was hesitant to read it because I though Renaissance like the time period. Now I'm glad I'm reading it.
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 7
…Im glad you didn’t put that in the story. It would have just made everyone crack up. HOWEVER I loved this story and I loved this chapter. I laughed so so so hard in the beginning when Harry said “So it’s like being married” or whatever he said when he didn’t seem to care they were ‘married’. And then the proposal was so goddamn heartfelt and sweet somehow and it made my heart flutter. I loved Draco at the end there, and Harry was funny and sweet two. I hate ending fics, but then again there’s a 6 ‘book’ series sitting in your stories and a bunch of oneshots and no so oneshot’s too read right now also xD.

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 6
** cliffie? LOL. Nice. Never had that happen before. I knew you wouldn’t kill Draco – there was no freakin way. However, it scared the crap out of me when Harry walked in to find Draco freezing cold and almost dead. I couldn’t help but laugh when Draco kept going on about it being a dream, and then Harry’s confession was so sweet. I’m glad they fixed things xDD. This just means Draco get’s to live!! Their going to consummate it!! I KNEW IT WAS SNAPE WHO’D DONE IT. Too bad he’s already bloody dead. I see Ron re-proposed if the diamond is any consolation.

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 5
I want to murder you. I really really do. I now have suspicions it was Snape who cast the spell – he knew an awful lot about it. I’m ** at Harry for being a damnable idiot and saying the wrong words at the wrong time, and I hate you for letting him do it. I hate Draco for running away like a tiny coward, and I’m desperate for him not to die. He’s grown on me ever since I fell for DracoHarry, and know I can’t even see him in a bad light in the book! Dxx Hermione better get back soon and Harry better figure things out even faster then that!

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 4
A Question has finally been answered. HE GAVE HIM HIS MAGIC!? Oh my gawd…that like tells how much he cares about Harry even if he didn’t bloody know it before hand! If only Harry would run into the book on his own accord. That would defeintly make things easier. If he could just read the spell, find out what happened, maybe just maybe something good would come of it. I’m going to be so mad if you don’t make them consummate! Although, I can’t see why you wouldn’t. You love making them shag xDD. Harry’s such a flirt, the end of this chapter was so funny. He runs up the stairs hoping Draco will follow – poor thing doesn’t seem to be catching a break at the time being.

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 3
Why won’t Draco just tell him? What does he want to hide it so bad? And Harry and Draco’s attraction’s getting really annoying as neither ever does anything about it. Hermione made the unbreakable vow, but what did that include? Either she can’t tell about her ‘research’ because of the vow or she just doesn’t want to. Hm…lot’s of unanswered questions. I hate when they fight a lot, it steals valuable DracoHarry time Dx. I also hated the waiter – although ** off Draco might just get him to make some kind of move sooner rather than later. I’m happy for Hermione and Ron and it was funny and sad at the same time when Harry walked in on the ‘confession’. Geez, I haven’t been this fascinated by and idea in a long time. There’s so many QUESTIONS I want ANSWERED xD

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 2
I hate you. Angsty ** fic. I love angst, why am I complaining? xDD. Why can’t Draco do magic? This just keeps raising more questions rather then answering them… I’m like overly curious as to what the ** happened, now. And then that kiss was just out of nowhere, but not unwelcome. When Ginny announced her news, I felt so horrible for Harry. And then he felt so out of place in the place he used to consider his second home, next to Hogwarts. His family doesn’t seem to be much of his family anymore – though that makes Draco and him very similar as Draco didn’t go see his parents. I love that Draco spoils Hermione’s kid’s, but when did he get so close to them? **, I suppose the only way to get these questions answered is to keep reading.

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
Jesus, I can not for the life of me understand Draco’s place in this convoluted story line. And yet oddly, it just makes me all the more intrigued and ready to read more. I was surprised out of my wits at the fact that Ron and Hermione had divorced, but I suppose that’s okay. I hate Ginny for leaving him – I would probably never give up hope. I might do as she did and fall for another, I mean you can’t really control your heart, but I doubt I could ever think ‘He’s never going to wake up’. Need to continue on to understand Draco’s part in all this~

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
YinKeket
2009-08-13 . chapter 7
the whole stroy had me on edge which you did a good job. yeah Harry and Draco don't have to die. Aw Harry the uke. keep up the good work and do your best. can't wait to read more Harry and Draco stories. this story is so damn cute.
YinKeket
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
ok i am happy that this story is done. now i can do this. the 1st chapter what and inthe world is going on! *sigh* mut better. i wouldn't blame Harry to freak out, i know i would. Go Pansy for telling the truth. i like her so far in this story. aw i can't wait to read more on what Draco did for Harry.
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