quite a mature story for a rated K, but it's really good (maybe because i'm a huge fan of MK -_-)

i suggest moving this to the mana khemia section of the site.

This fic felt incomplete, even though it was marked complete and you seemed to be building up to what happened at the end. I sometimes have trouble finding good ending/closure lines myself...

Mana Khemia now has its own section, by the way. I was wondering where all the Vayne/Jess was, and then I found it in here.

x) haha, I really like the ending of this story!

Aw. They snuggle up to each other! That would be so cute!