love the start

aww im sad that theyve all had to go theyre seperate ways but happy tha 1) caius is gone and two none of the cullens are harmed

ohh poor bella poor edward

wow this chapter was beautiful i actually cried

OMG finally loving this story even more as i continue to read it

oh poor edward that lasdt sentance caught a lunp in my throat, it was beautiful and painful at the sme time...
can;t wait to see what happens next. you are an amazing writer

aww ally said yes... awww, i feel sorry for edward bella and jasper, looking forward to seeing how it all pans out

awww poor jasper, i feel really sorry for him.

go adrian ! i am really loving this story it just keeps getting better. im loving the tension finally showing between edward and jasper

the songs between edward and bella were beautiful especially lessons learned it brought tears to myt eyes
brilliant!

aww poor edward
looking forward to seeing how things play out really enjoying it so far thanks for providing excellent fanfic

lol chastity belt loving the motorbike sex

omg go Alice. feeling sad about edward but lookking forward to seeing what will happen next

you should do a B/E/J lemon from B's perspective, that would be cool lol :)

I know we were supposed to come into this story with an open mind but Edward is such a douche! It's like if you had him in your life you wouldn't need an overprotective father and brother all wrapped in one. Seriously! He needs to take a huge chill pill. That's all!