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muumuu122
2009-11-30 . chapter 14
"Oh, what the hell."

There you go! Right attitude :D
Mokkevva
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
I kept reading and realized that you used several different animals. In Ice Hunt, the monsters only look like polar bears. But yours are still cool.
Mokkevva
2009-09-04 . chapter 7
I'm really enjoying this story. Have you ever read James Rollins's ICE HUNT? The guards remind me of his grendels, only the grendels seemed much worse. If you havent read it, then you should check it out.
LynLin
2009-09-03 . chapter 13
Cliffhangers. D: Naruto's dream was really interesting, but my favorite part was the talk between Gaara and Kyuubi. Oh, Gaara. hahahha and then OROCHIMARU? GAWD DANG IT, WHY. hahaha I AM SO BEYOND EXCITED AT THIS POINT. GUH. Awesome. I can't wait for more!

-Lyn
ensis013
2009-07-25 . chapter 12
Oh gosh! Kyuubi has taken over Naruto! You're an evil, evil person to stop there. I want to know more. But I understand that you have things to do. I like this chapter a lot and finally, its progressing into the main plot! Love the fight with Gaara. Totally cool. And the tension between Sasuke and Naruto is soo...tense...

And I vote for the OST! I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you and update when you're able to ! :D
ONIX-21
2009-07-24 . chapter 12
wahh awesome!!
Uh oh so Naruto's lost control?!?!
Great work!!
looking forward to seeing wat Naruto's gonna do and Sasuke as well :D
hope u update soon!! XD
Heihachi-Katayama
2009-07-24 . chapter 12
That was a cruel cliff hanger! I can, and somehow can't, imagine what will happen next! Please continue - i'm dying here!! ^_^
arzenna
2009-07-24 . chapter 12
Again, I love this chapter! Im addicted to this story but I guess Ill have to wait paitently for the next chappy. Goodluck sorting things out.
muumuu122
2009-07-24 . chapter 12
Sorry my bad, I misunderstood ^^'

And gas? I don't honestly care if it exists for real or not since it's not like this is supposed to be strictly realistic story anyway, with carriers and everything :) So a big yay for creative license!

About ost, not so interested.

I liked the chapter again :) <3
LynLin
2009-07-24 . chapter 12
I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU JUST ENDED IT THERE. I mean, really. haha nice foreshadowing! I was expecting it, but at the same time, I wasn't really sure if that was going to happen. And I really liked your introduction of the other characters. :D I'm sad that I won't see another update for a while, but real life does get in the way. Good luck with that! And with the wonky laptop! I can't wait! Thanks for writing this!
ensis013
2009-06-25 . chapter 11
The story is getting more and more interesting. And I'm soo happy to see a nice Itachi (who have not demonstrated any signs of insanity so far). Oh I can't wait for the action and will the Kyuubi really be taking over Naruto?

This is really interesting and I can't wait for more! :excited:
LynLin
2009-06-15 . chapter 11
I can't believe this is going to end soon. After I just discovered it too! It's absolutely amazing, and I can't understand why on earth it doesn't have a BAJILLION reviews. D: Anyway, I just love all the action and how the story is set up. It's so interesting, and I can't help but keep on reading. This was so great, I can't wait for more. Thank you so much for writing it!

-Lyn
Willeke
2009-06-15 . chapter 11
Hey,

I wanted to say that I really like your story Disarm. :)I just finished reading it.
I think you really write well –from the beginning I was sucked into your story - and I like the way you put Naruto in a ‘real life’-story, with all the weird stuff (kyuubi etc.) in it without making it feel too unreal. Furthermore I like the detail you put in your story, like Naruto thinks its cold all the time.
At last I want to say I think you have a really good writing style: I can notice you think before you write everything down (or afterwards), it makes your story pleasant to read. Besides your/ Naruto’s thoughts seem very reasonable, which makes it all the more understandable.

Greetings,
Willeke

Ps. I come from the Netherlands, so I am sorry if my English is incorrect.
ONIX-21
2009-06-15 . chapter 11
Great work as always!!
o Sai has arrived!! :D
lovin how this is developing
theres lots of action
and i really look forward to new chapters hehe
looks like Sasuke and Naruto are gettin closer slowly :)
cant wait to see where this is goin to go
hope u update soon!! XD
Hispanic Tenshi
2009-06-14 . chapter 11
Yay! I've been waiting for this chapter for the last two weeks, actually. It was a random want to read the next chapter (It just... came out of no where), so I was super excited when I saw it! :3 Ah, Naruto is going insane and Sai! Crazy kid. And Sasuke is a jerk! But you can do it! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! :D

(Happy early early birthday!)
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