Are you going to make a follow up story to this one.

Great story with a great ending.
AKE:D

THAT was a great story

Absolutely loved it!

I think your characterisations were fine and fingers crossed that things end as happily on the series; although, the way they've jerked us all around in the past, it might take more than just fingers.

L-O-V-E this story! Great ending! It makes me feel better even if TPTB give us some snarky dark, drop off a cliff ending--we have yours!! Thanks.

I think it was Great. I only hope this can be true. Only when the end does come and this is what or closely happens will I be truly happy. If it does not I will be very upset and never watch again. Im so upset that Billy just walked away and hope he wont miss Grissom from his interview with ET and hope we the fans wont miss him, that I will never watch again. Great job.

Yes! Thanks for a wonderful "what if?"-and for filling in the blanks so very perfectly! I do love how both Sara and Gil started to jump to conclusions...but finally listened! A great read-thanks!

Hey, you got them together which I knew you had to do ,who else could he be giving up the lab for,and you gave them a geek baby..lol..couldn't resist huh? just the thought of him with a whole new life to take care of and teach makes you go ah..well tptb are idiots but in the long run who cares ..the real GSR is here in the stories created by the fans who actually started it in the begining..long may they continue..talk to you soon
Bernie

i like it.you did have me wondering
what happen when he got off the elevader
i hope something like that happens to.
it wont be the same without grissom.
nice job on this one.

Nice story. How I wish the conclusion of your story is how it will play out. Unfortunately, Naren Shankar did say there will be no wedding or geek baby for these two. My last ditch hope is that they at least wind up together but that is not what I read in the Entertainment Weekly article, which hinted that Sara is over Grissom and basically ended it. I certainly hope not.

loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

Oh Ruth, great story! Thank you!
I hope this will be the outcome in "One to go".
But I guess TPTB will only show us Gil ringing a doorbel (who's we will never know) en stapping inside with a big smile.
I hope to god it will be Sara's doorstep.

But this was great, loved the way you used the flashback! Keepin' us guessin'.

A big thank you from Amsterdam, Gerda

Sob, sob, beautifully done. Beaufifully crafted especially when Grissom thought she was talking about the marine biologist. FAB. Thank you so much for such a nice emotional journey.

Great story! perfect ending!

That was awesome-loved the ending and the geekbaby! I so would love for it to end that way...