 MadCap 2009-11-08 . chapter 1 Oh very nice. Excellent blending of the movie-verse and the '03 series. And Bishop's no-nonsense business attitude and demeanor are caught perfectly. Especially loved that last line, it captured Agent Bishop's latent smartassery to a T. |
 ninjagirl15981 2009-01-09 . chapter 1i liked how you put bishop with the movies i think that it fits perfectly! good job! |
 Nineteenth Souljah 2009-01-09 . chapter 1I really liked it! It read like a continuation of the fourth movie, and your characterisation for Bishop here was niftily done. Well-written as always. Great job. :) |
 shadewatcher 2009-01-09 . chapter 1interesting, but personally i think Bishop owes the turtles. they totally took care of the ultimate Shredder where Bishop couldn't. :P good story though. |