I don't know which part was more horrible - that he was raped (that is what I interpreted his comments to mean), the lessons learned or the distant cold manner in which the lessons were learned.
Well done. Disturbing and, unfortunately, it happens all too often.
Thanks for the view.

I, I am shocked. Damn it, I should have read the stupid warning. It's a good fic, just very very sad once the implications set in.

Oh that's so sad, poor Harry. I like the way you have Severus's thoughts after each line of Harry's essay, I love seeing someones line of thought as it changes or comes to a realisation. Very nice in a very sad way, um that sounds funny but hopefully you get it =)

That was really written, very sad too, well done :)

Wow. This is really well written!!
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Well-written; I like how you intertwine the words of what Harry has written with Snape's thoughts. It is amazing what some students will write about when given an assignment to write something (as innocuous as it may seem), leaving a teacher with much more than he or she bargained for and opening up an opportunity to get that student help.

Interesting, but there's nothing really to this; no sure ending. It's implied, of course, but whatever.

I don't think you should do a sequel. The ending hangs perfectly, like a really good piece of work should. The best stories have a ending that makes the reader think after reading it, and you'll managed to do that here. I've never been able to do that.
This was really moving, though I did see a few grammical errors. Not that I really care, but I wasn't sure if you noticed.
(Also, in some of your other pieces, you spell dying wrong. Once you spelled it dieing and once you spelled it dyeing.)
Besides that though, I really enjoy your writing, from what I've read so far!

this is really sad... poor harry...

This was indescribable. I...wonder what Snape will do with this information in the future -- say nothing of Dumbledore possibly knowing Harry is at least being harmed and willfully blinding himself to the consequences of his interference in one boy's life.

This was painful to read and even more painful to consider afterward.

That was really well written - subtle yet not so much that you don't understand what's being described!

I don't know what to say... Your fanfiction is hard yet beautiful. Not many words but a lot of essence. My hesrt is clenched. I'm almost crying. Almost is too much for me.
Thank you. I really have no words.

good fic.

Absolutely chilling. Not only were my emotions shattered over what happened to Harry, I could see Snape's perception of the famous Boy-Who-Lived ripped apart with each sentence. Amazing.

This begs for a sequel.