 Adriana Swan 5/11/09 . chapter 1I like Alice, but i prefer Leah so much.
So... Jasper & Leah 3
Great fic, congratulations * |
 I Am Switzerland101 1/21/09 . chapter 1hmm i dont know leave it as jasper leah. the story was amazing! only an increadible writter can make a few lines that good. great story!
-NM |
 nikkiRA 1/10/09 . chapter 1I liked it, even though it was sad.
for characters, I usually just put the pairing. So I would put Leah/Jasper, because it's a Leah/Jasper pairing, even though Alice is in. Compendre, amigo?
(I have no idea how to speak Spanish. I'm sorry) |
 rach 'na lasair 1/10/09 . chapter 1I loved this- how could I not?
I liked how you included Alice in this.
Oh can I give you a Jasper/Leah, I've got it in my head but seeing as I'm not a writer I will not attempt to write it. Anyway I was thinking you could explore Jaspers odd feelings at seeing Jacob and Leah interact and he doesn't know why he feels the odd emotion which he recognizes as jealousy.
You don't have to write it but you can... |
 Nicky 1/9/09 . chapter 1 Please write more Jasper/Leah stories. I'm a total Blackwater fan, but I've been loving Whitwater more and more. You write it so well. I'd love to see what you could do with them in a chaptered story! |
 VinnyG 1/9/09 . chapter 1 I LOVE IT! Can't wait to hear some more :) |
 LenaLuna 1/9/09 . chapter 1do you write on a plot? idk srry i just really um... all it says in your stories are about what they are feeling... not much plot you know... if you need help writing let me know :) srry i just... meh all well good story |
 sparechange1224 1/9/09 . chapter 1Love your drabbles with Leah/Jasper pairing. I never thought I would read anything with those two paired together. Great Job! |
 dyingimmortal 1/9/09 . chapter 1I'd say Alice and Jasper. -shrug- But that's just my opinion.
I liked it! ... or as much as I can like something while not liking the situation. -scratches head- That came out wrong. What I mean is, I liked it, and I'd like it even more if Alice wasn't suffering (even though she doesn't know it xP), but I still like it a lot 'cause Alice doesn't /know/ she's suffering... since I like Alice and all...
-makes face- Blah. I can't describe what I mean.
Basically? I liked it.
There, how's that? :D
((&& I'm not sitting around waiting all day for you to update, either! ;D)) |