 Sweetie7smiled 6/10/10 . chapter 1Neat story! I hope you will continue it soon. Thanks for writing! |
 sorcerergirl90 5/3/09 . chapter 1hi i was going through all of the sroties i have alerts on and i realized that you never updated this story. please tell me this isn't a one-shot! i really liked it. |
 Aya1024 1/14/09 . chapter 1O. I like it! I think this could grow into a really cool AU story! It's very promising so far. Please do continue. |
 kimmy 1/11/09 . chapter 1 WOW. This one almost gave me a heart attack! I swear, one of these days marina you're gonna kill someone with your killer stories. but SOME of us can live for ever so you continue your writing please! |
 Christina 1/10/09 . chapter 1 I love your story so far. I had always wondered what it would have been like had Bella known Edward during that time in his umm... existence. Very well written. Please do continue. |