Poor Willow! I feel for her, even though I am not familiar with the character, the preceeding storyline or songfics. I presume this is a short visual sequence with just music for sound? If so it seems like a good one.

Just one boo-boo. "His blue fur was purged by her tears." The word "purge" means to vent or release something. According to this sentence, Mr. Soft's blue fur was clogging a drain or was an unwanted blemish on his skin, and her tears unclogged the drain or cleared up his complexion. I think you mean "permeated" - but "soaked" would be more effective.

that wuz...so sad..sniff...tears are coming out of my eyes...probably because i accidently poked one them ..but...great fic!

Beautiful job on your first Song-fic. The lyrics are perfect for how Willow must be feeling. I'm sure she and Tara will end up working things out if she can get passed not using her magic. Once again I say, amazing job.

Awww, that is soo sweet..and sad at the same time...very moving

That is so beautiful. How sad! Willow and Tara forever!