I LOVED IT! UPDATE PLEASE

whats going to happen cant wait

Gud wun. Nuvah wun NOUH!

i want to know more until the ritual and what would kestrel do in the living and pinto's reaction. Do you think she ever really wanted to go back? since the singer people was so happy to feel dead or be dead while singing the firesong.

i don't think that mumpo will say such things! it's a bit out of character.

Hey dont you think that having an emotional bond with Kestrel is not enough for Bowman? i think he wouldn't risk such a thing and don't you think that Kestrel will get mad for being brought back in a physical form?

Sure kestrel is not dead for sure, since the singer people always come back alive.

I don't think hanno hath would actually cry. He should have a conversation in his wife grave like pinto did. crying is over rated for hanno hath.

ah!

Ok, now you have to update pronto-ish. You can't leave it like that for another 9 months.

I'd forgotten you existed, honestly. That's not good.

But your fic is. Not a good combination...

-for you!

Oh come ON? You just GAVE UP? This is seriously awesome.

PLEASE write more.

Nice Story. Please update.

cool story

can i get updates?

poor pinto.

COOL