 Vitani 4/25/07 . chapter 1Oh wow! I didn't know you wrote for Weiss! It was such a joy to find another wonderful written piece on some of my other favorite killers! *grin* I liked this moody story a lot, because the biggest aspect I like about these characters is their struggles with maintaining their humanity while being in Weiss. You captured that well in such a brief work! It was a little frustrating (for me, anyhow) to read because of the all-centered format, and the breaks between perspectives wasn't very clear. Ah, and that statement in Yoji's part, about their new Mission where he hopes they could just steal items and leave without killing - Weiss only do Missions that involve killing. That's the whole concept of being a White Hunter. Other than that stuff, it's another good read! Maybe someday you could write about Schwarz ...? |
 phoinos 5/16/02 . chapter 1 I loved it! Very insightful and moody, angsty... I love your style of writing. It's beautiful, and it flows so well.
Please write more!
By the way, not to digress or anything... I like your s/n: Gerald Tarrant. That trilogy is one of my favorite series of books. _ |