Ooh, satisfyingly creepy! It's amazing how you were able to take a character who was only portrayed as a freak to such an intense level! I especially liked how you switched between scenes with such ease.

Your writing is fantastic! Miboshi is captured as a tortured soul, you portrayed him perfectly. I love this fanfic, its so dark and wonderful.

Ahh...it's so sad. This is the first time I read a fanfic on Miboshi and it was GOOD. For some weird reason, I like characters who's not really focused on in the anime (like Miboshi). It must have been hard to come up with a past that can explain part of Miboshi's twisted personality. Great writing!

Wow, this story was great! I opened it because there aren't many Miboshi stories, and he's like one of the most mysterious characters in all of FY. But, I think you did an awesome job of capturing his personality(cynical as it was...it was amusing ;D) and that of the rest of Seiryuu. I really really enjoyed it and normally I don't like first person narrative, but you pulled it off very well. I look forward to the next chapter! :D