As you'll notice...I'm going through your FY fics (at least until I convince myself to go back to studying). Tomo was my favorite bad guy...mostly because he was strong in his evil convictions and didn't back down. If you're going to be a villain you shouldnt be too sympathetic of a character. Perhaps it is because Tomo was so mysterious that one doesnt know the reasons for his 'evil' unlike Nakago and Soi...who's reasons are explained at the end.

I love Tomo fics, and Tomo, and evil people in general but this was a good piece of writing. Literature, and great description. You go!

screw the teachers. 5 mins isn't killing anyone!

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