How totally dashing! Lol!
I love this story! You write very, very VERY well!
How did you manage to manipulate your language to fit the time period so well? Are you just awesome?
Lol
PLEASE UPDATE! Very soon.
I really wanna see what happens at the masque. Oh la la.
Lol

Dahaba

:) very well written, if I do say so myself.
Sincerely,
~marie0920~

Such a strange but intriguing AU!
Susannah is really believably as she is and, oh man, the cattiness.
It's really good.

I like your story, please update!
i wanna know what happens with jesse!

Well, Ms Picassini, You have my vote to continue with this narrative.
And it was quite joyous when Lady Susannah threw those insults at Lady Katherine.
And incredibly disturbing when Lord Bradley did, well, that, to Ms Cecily.
( did I say all that right, 'cause I don't know if I did or not)

I must say you write well - especially considering the time period this is set - it would definitely not been a piece of cake. ahh and I love that you're bringing in all our fav - Kelly in the form of Katherine, Debbie - deborah, etc. totally awesome and poor Jesse - he's stuck with Hector but hey that was the misfortune he was stuck with at birth. Nevertheless your character are intact (I mean that you have done well in the part of characterization) and this story makes me want more. So chiquita (lol I don't know what the word means but it sounds awesome) anyways please update

I really like this! Very well written, but also very interesting, kepp it up!

This is very cool! I like it!

Please Please Please Please Please update Shadowlit Facades... it's been 3 months and I don't know how much longer I can wait. I absolutley love this story too... but I like Shadowlit Facades better and want - no need it to be updated... now.

This story has a lot of potential! I really think you should pursue this; it's a great idea and the way that you have set up the story so far is great. Keep up the good work!

Ohh I liked this opening, I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's very different and a completely new take but I think it's going to work out into an intricate layered novel :) Already drawn in :)

this looks good! please please continue!