I really like it.Very introspective and well thought out. It gives a meaning to their time in Ginny's first year, especially when after, approximately, 8 years she still hasn't forgotten him.

Wow...I like it. It was really deep and quite dark...I like it.

Hi, I just read your story. It is a very powerful one-shot, I have to say. You should write more hp fics, definitely. there were a few typo errors, just read it over one more time, otherwise, everything was perfect. gj!!

i love this. the imagery is beautiful, poetic.
and its so poignant. very well written
fave line is prolly: In quiet moments, she thought she could hear her bones creak.

very powerful ending too.

i love how you did him, his thoughts, etc. i love his self justificatin - it was alright because he had never chosen.

Really powerful one-shot. You write with a seemingly effortless poetry to your words. I saw a couple of typos but I don't know that they're enough to re-upload the chapter over. Also, I can't remember where they were. =/ I know that's probably very annoying, to have someone mention a typo and then not be able to say where it was. So sorry for that.
I don't read Tom stories very much (although they're preferable to Voldy stories) simply because I'm worried I'll get freaked out, even though there is that kind of magnetic force to his character. I really enjoyed this, and liked how you centered it around a philosophy of choice and drew the characters around that.
I don't know what to add, other than that I like the abstractness of the story and your intense imagery and metaphors.