That was one crazy ride of a story. fun to read, interesting style

Multi-chapter? - Hopefully. This story looks promising.

yay for murder! i always thought some of the femal characters just needed to die... yes i am insane, yes i do have split personalities that are keeping me on the verge of hysteric laughter and tears. i'm weird like that. it's a really cool story.

I'm surprised more people haven't reviewed this story, I really enjoyed this first chapter. I see some similarities between this and Crown and Anchor, though this is clearly more disturbing. You have the ability to write characters well, and to lead a reader on though your story always wanting to know what will happen next. My only very small critique would be sometimes you overdo the description, though this is me being terribly nit-picky. I look forward to reading more of both stories. Keep up doing an amazing job at entertaining the leagues of Naruto fans. :)

Very, very interesting start, and very promising! I hope you can update, and I hope the story turns out to have a not-sad ending, lol!

:D

Wow, that's pretty creepy. I wonder who the kid at the beginning is? Sai's a pretty freaky guy. There's probably a reason for that, right? Haha. Great so far, pretty interesting! Keep up the good work!

~Michi P.

Interesting history ^-^ Sai's hobby is...hmm...scarry -=- But Naruto is interesting , I can't wait for more.