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| Angel of the day 2007-02-21 ch 8, anon. | abuseI liked that! |
| queenofthebookworms 2006-12-18 ch 4, | abuseYou're really good at writing. This is a great chapter. It's so cute (is that a good way to put it?) how they're confused. I love this pairing so so much. |
| queenofthebookworms 2006-12-18 ch 3, | abusePretty good. I like the other chapter better but this is still good. I don't think rosethorn is really the tickling type though. I'd probably rate it about 8/10 and the previous chapter 9/10. |
| queenofthebookworms 2006-12-18 ch 2, | abuseThis is the most in character fanfic i've read in ages. Keep up the great work. QueenoftheBookworms |
| Cousin1 2006-10-13 ch 8, anon. | abusewell? do they marry? i imagine it will be an... interesting wedding. do they have children? what will rosethorn do with brier WHEN she has children? what happens to everyone else? you can answere all of my questions in your NEXT chappter! if you do one. rosethorn: NO! don't do another one! AH! *runs out of the room, screaming* tris & sandry & brier & daja: YEA! ANOTHER CHAPTER! rosethorn: no! do NOT make another one or i'll hang you in the well! (also, if you do another chapter, could you add a little of brier/tris or brier/sandry? (brier/tris would be my choice though... but it's your fanfic.)) |
| hollybridgetpeppermint 2006-05-14 ch 8, | abuseaw...soo sweet! love it! and the pairing is my favorite! keep writing, you're awesome! yay! BANZAI! ~hollybridgetpeppermint |
| That-Fresh-Rain-Smell 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseoh i love the idea, but...well...have you read: The Will Of the Empress, the circle reforged? cause that is the latest book and it reveals some...interestinmg things. i mean, im fine with it, its funny and a good TP story, but well, if you havwent read it, long story short: daja finds out she's bi, and, dumb readers that i/we are, find out that rosethorn and lark are together...well it sorta says that anyway...see, briar goes: "daj, do you think with lark and rosthorn and everything...do you think that we would care?" after he finds out about daj. ok well, reply. but i do love the idea of rosthorn and crane, their opposites atract! ^-^ yay! but lark understands rosthorn better...so...idn...reply plzZ! |
| Lydia 2005-08-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseI always thought this couple was so obivous. Good story. Could you write a sequal? |
| Dedicate_Rosethorn 2005-04-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseLuv ur story! one problem, lark and rosethorn are lovers - TP said so |
| Dancing Amethyst 2004-05-31 ch 8, | abuseEr... the ending *was* weird, but the rest of the fic was really sweet! I really liked it; it was cute! And this from me who vastly prefers Lark/Rosethorn over Rosethorn/Crane. But I really did like it. I shall keep it. In my favorites, all prettily. *wanders off* ~*Amethyst*~ |
| Rosa 2003-12-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseCheesy. Its really cheesy. I think this fic is seriously OOC but quite fun all the same ^_^ |
| tomato_lover 2003-07-23 ch 8, anon. | abuse"Ah." Nice touch. KEEP WRITING, or I won't kill you, because then you really won't be able to keep writing, but I WILL seriously maim all parts that you don't need for writing. *YOU SICK PERVERT!!* OOps. I guess my muse is back from Florida. *NO, VYKI, I MEANT HER LEFT ARM! OR RIGHT ARM! OR WHAT IF SHE'S AMBIDEXTROUS* Heheh. *clears throat* anyway, keep your fingers moving on your keyboard and I won't be charged with attempted murder, which will be good for everybody |
| KylarK 2002-08-02 ch 8, | abuseNice work! Rosethorn isn't quite as domineering as she usually is, but then again, she probably wasn't in love with Crane either! For us poor readers who love this couple (me included of course) please write another! *Athena* |
2002-07-25 ch 8, anon. | abuse*would like more, please...erm...sequel* |
| AC 2002-04-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey I like your story but the end suck so much.................................. Not Just Kidding It really is a good story!! |