Awesome story! It has this special Fight Club-aura all over, and i love it. (Y)

Wow, that was really intense! Good job on the characterization of 'Narrator'. I really liked Tyler's little monologue and the way 'Narrator' responded was brilliant. Great job.

This is one of those things Im going to read over and over again, so Im reviewing now so that I dont feel like an asshole later when I dont. This is so well written that I actually forgot that I was reading a fanwork there at the end. Plus, I guess I can relate to the whole fake emotions thing, which makes it interesting.

I enjoyed this, particularly the following lines:

"We are now a community of two. We have not reached the level of enlightenment needed to become hermits, but we are too enlightened to be a part of the flock."

Thank you for sharing. :)

OH WOW that was amazing, stomach-churningly sad and wonderful and sexy at the same time. Write more!