Aw, this made me feel all giddy and fuzzy inside. 8D I was bit surprised that Nowaki didn't figure out whom Misaki was talking about when he mentioned devil teacher, but..perhaps I just read wrong and misunderstood. It happens a lot when I'm fangirling over a story.. |D; It's kind of annoying how Nakamura still won't let Egoist and Romantica couples meet each other despite some brief cameos, but fics like these are nice then. (:

Really liked this, thanks for sharing~

I liked this, but I want to know how Nowaki puts is own advice into action too. I know that I sound demanding, but reading this I really thought it needed more of Nowaki and Hiro-san at the end. That's my two cents worth. Well done!

Really good story;)

This is sweet :)

Wow, this felt like a chapter RIGHT OUT of the series. Your characterization is absolutely spot on. No words...

Aw. I love it :D

Really nice! I really enjoyed this. It was really cute and well thought out! Great job on your first fan fic and believe me your English is fine! That is the only language I know and you already write way better than me!

XD ha hah

Thank you for uploading and writing! Keep up the good work.

Aw, the story is so sweet ! The characterization is very well-respected, I particularly love Nowaki's character.

Thank you for this story ^^

Brilliant. :)

This was very good! I really like how you worked the connections between the characters; it was well done and followed the spirit of the show. I especially like how Nowaki and Misaki both independently thought the same thing (about lovers holding the entire soul) at the end. You characterization was also very well done.

Your grammar was also very good, especially since you say English is not your native language. If you want any advice, the only thing I could really offer is to watch your tenses (past vs. present vs. future), as you mixed those up occasionally. (For example, "Nowaki's eyes widened a bit again. Now that he mentions it…" "Widened" is past tense, but "mentions" is present tense.) Other than this, your grammar was flawless, which is always nice.

Overall, you did an excellent job. Bravo! :)

Okay, so I tried looking for some JR fics after recently discovering how great the manga and anime is, but as I browsed through some of them, I found that they were okay, but nothing special. Granted, I've only read a few, but from what I saw, I wasn't terribly interested. Of course, I don't blame the authors at all. Not even one bit since writing for JR is no easy task. I myself wouldn't even attempt writing it because I probably wouldn't be able to pull it off. But you, my friend, pulled it off almost perfectly!

I've always found you to be a good author whenever I read your South Park fics, so when I saw ur pen name on the list of junjou stories, I clicked on it without hesitation, knowing without a doubt that this would be good. And I was right =).

Aww Nowaki's such a sweetheart with Hiro-san! I just love the egoist couple! :D

Awesome one-shot, dude! I am definitely faving this!

Peace Out!:P

This was so sweet! I loved it!

For english not being your first language, you did really well. There are a few errors here and there, but they're small and easily corrected. Also every once in a while there's a tense shift from past to present and back again, but also easily corrected. I liked the concept, and the resolution to it, too (the help editing vs inspiration).
Nice job :)

(I should just really log in already..)
It's a good fic overall,whether or not how you can speak english;that part usually doesn't matter~.

In my opinion,the gay marriage portion doesn't seem to fit in the whole fic's point despite showing more of Nowaki's insecurities.It seemed like it was thrown in there just to make the fic longer...it was in character though,so I won't judge just over that.(I REALLY like fics with the characters in character!You captured everyone's characteristics,feelings,and reactions very well!)

The last sentences for each of the last paragraphs are so cute and deserves to be quoted!

this was a really cute story. it made me a little sad at the beginning, but I really like it ^.^