Such a cute story. I'd love to read more of it though : )

That was so cute and sad! It was adorable! LUV IT!! =D

nice write soon

Yay! What a brilliant, wonderful story! I'm also in your boat, having watched the anime but never read the manga... and I just finished rewatching it for the bajillionth time, and this was like a perfect ending! It's so good. I love how I could just totally picture Kyo covering his face while he leans back. Classic.

Fabulous!

~Sandy~

its good. i would type more, but am tired. ur writing style is nice. u have poetic metaphors that put other things in perspective.

fantastic...it was perfect, really.
Very in character and cute. I liked Kyou´s thoughts and how he thinks about tohru. and worries for her.
and he calls her tohru-can..

awesome story
very nice writing very nice indeed :D