naw
that is really sweet!
xx

awesome so far! wonder what happens next...?? Can't wait for your next update.

Uh, uh, uh. What's this? What happened? Why they're separating?
Update soon, please!

OH, that was an abrupt change of heart at the end there...I'm curious as to what bought it on. Looking forward to more.

XDD Interesting. It's been a while since I looked for Remus/Severus fanfiction, seeing as there are so few that are actually well writter. -_- I like that way your fic has been going though! >_< Poor Severus got PWNED on his sexual performance by Remus. Update soon please!

That was hot, there is no doubt about that. I mean, come on, the thought of Remus licking him there is just overwhelming to me. And that Severus got to take him the first time. Man, kill me please. But what really dissatisfied me is that Remus hasn't yet taken him. Other than that I have no complaint. I don't know if this is it but this have so much potential if it is follow through, though I will say that is good as it stand. I love this.

Mm, hot sexing! Nice job with the smut. I do like a Snape who can show a little vulnerability. Great chapter and I'm very much looking forward to more.

I love this story to bits! The fear and angst that go so well with the setting (during the first voldemort uprising) is so fitting.
I love Severus seeking out some lovin ... it's very rare to get an fic with Severus willingly seeking out some satisfaction ... as he usually shuns it. It's refreshing to see him still be angsty yet indulgent.
I'm very excited to see the Remus and Severus interactions grow as the story progresses. Which I am very happy to see that their past history hasn't miraculously vanished/been forgiven overnight and that both still harbor strong dislike for the other.

Cannot wait till the next chapter and keep up the good work! I almost never review but i thought i should let you know that i love it!

Great chapter! I do like that Severus and Remus are so mistrustful of each other and that you didn't let old prejuduces be miraculously resolved. I'm also enjoying (not sure that's the right word) your portrayal of the Death Eaters. Their callousness even towards their own breathren is chilling. I'm looking forward to more. :)

I love how Snape is portrayed, he's such a bastard but you really end up empathizing with him. I'm excited to find out where this is going...

Very interesting...I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Fantastic first chapter! I just about screamed at DD when Snape said:
“Then do something about it! Ask questions, plant false plans and if I hear them on my end, we’ll know who it is! Use a truth serum – torture, anything!”

It's exactly what I yell at the screen everytime I read one of these first Order fics. I love your Dumbledore here - hard and no nonsense...exactly the way I picture the leader of an underground rebellion group to behave. I enjoy reading about this time of their lives and look forward to more.

Wow. I happened upon this story, and saw that it was new and, WOW. Your style of writing is excellent. I'm very big about grammatical errors, and from what I could see; there were none. The story flows so well and all of the characters never once become OOC. The detail is excellent, and I LOVE the conversation with Lily, James, Sirius and Remus while they are watching television. I think that conversation captures their friendship perfectly and I'm excited to see where this goes.
:)

~Puerta