Wow, great work^^
I love how you write.:D

You've got some beautiful language here. Describing Heh and her world and emotinal states. Helios too. I really like it.
This language though, makes neh seem reather weak at the need. fragile rose

This is beautifully written. I love that we get a glimpse into the twisted mind of Nehellenia. Aw man, poor Helios.

Nice work.