Oh, I love this. Even in so few words, you make two non developed characters so vivid. I love your Dorcas, how she compares the feeling at the movie to after Fabion dies; and the last sentence was gorgeous.

So sad and beautiful. You've done it again.

You're not very nice to them, are you?
This is amazing. As usual.

Agh... the entire First Order's a tragedy! I like the line about how she can only cry in movies and not at funerals, actually the summary is why I read this fic!

Hey,
That was too beautiful. I very much like your style of writing. Well done, and keep it up!
ranDUMM

Nice. I liked the repetition of the choking.

oh GOD... that was heartbreaking.
Favorited.
Pure emotion... great job.

Wow, this is really great!! I love it!! My favorite line is the one in the summary, that is so good.
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Oh, this was so sad and beautiful! I loved it! I loved how Dorcas wouldn't even reach for Fabian's hand, and how the goodnight kiss was just a habit. And how she couldn't cry and funerals anymore - beautiful job, that was great!