I like this. =) I can't wait for an update. ^^

I love your story! Baroqueheat's chapter-drabble-thing was my favorite though, by a long shot. x)

You're doing such a great job with portraying the characters, and as far as I can tell, your spelling and punctuation are perfect. So some more kudos!

Oh! And thank you so very much for the inspiration and the confidence you gave me. ^^ I'm off to write my own Dazzle fic now.

- Silver

such cute chapters

Amazing~
Good job on capturing the essence of the relationship of the characters in Dazzle~

*Funny look on my face* I love it.

I don't even know what this manga is, and I can't find it, but reading about the characters from your story makes me want to know them. :D

Hello, just wanted to say that your four short pieces really catch the story of Dazzle. So great job!

~Shini

O.O Wow. I think this is great! It's so short, but so impactive. And I'm glad you liked my Dazzle story, too. I have a habit of reading the story's my fans write too, so I give them a bit of what they gave me. Anyways as i said before, this is good. I LOVE YOU! Ahaha. Well, perhaps not "love", but you get the idea. Love the writing. Okay this is a long enough review.
Ciao!
~bunny

I love it! Please write more it's short.

That last line made the whole story worth reading.

I'll read this later, but I justed wanted to point out that this anime also goes by the name of the manga dazzle which there is a category for. I really enjoy your soul eater fics.