Very nice. All of these are just wonderful. I think you captured Mr. Gray very well, and I feel you on Quatermain - there's just such a huge difference between his personality in the books as opposed to the movie . . .
Nice fic...I guess...Actually, i read your fic without reading it, if you know what i mean. I was reading all the chapters, a few lines only because i don't like short chapters. And i saw that you like repo! the genetic opera! So, why you don't use your talent (Yes, i think that you have talent, you only have to do larger chapters) in the repo! fandom! I'll be waiting one of your fics in the repo forum!. Hahaha. Now i'll read this fic.
btw, i hope you don't support Grilo (GraveRobber/Shilo) Just saying! If you do, that's ok. ;)
I liked Jekyll's POV the most, but that's just because he's my favorite character. Skinner's POV was probably the most insightful, as he really does wear a front all of the time that he's interacting with people. I'm interested in what you have to say about Griffin, as The Invisible Man didn't go into his head as much as I would have liked.
So far, I am really enjoying this fic. I really like that you stuck to canon/graphic novel Mina instead of movie Mina, because while I don't know what canon Mina is like (having never read Dracula), I totally liked graphic novel Mina much better than movie Mina. She's less kick ass in the movie, and more "lol i'mma vampire! ship me with everyone!".
Also, I would like to suggest that you get to reading The Picture of Dorian Gray. It's pretty awesome.
I love it! Really, really great stuff. You've interpreted Jekyll perfectly (in my opinion); I especially loved 'Lacking the courage to go about things the right way, he was left to go about them the wrong way; lacking the courage to stop going about them the wrong way, he sought for the easy way out.' Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the League's chapters. :)