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ArtLightLove
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
So interesting... if I where a better writer I might have to venture a story of my own with these two.
Casey thinks this is RAD
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
i LOVE this! perfect portrayal of the (best two) characters. my favorite line: "...Unless of course a portkey really is the proper way to banish wrackspurts.” brilliant! plus the last line- truely river-esque. LOVE it!
Doddridge
2009-08-28 . chapter 1
Wow...can I find the words to tell you how cool this story is? First of all, I commend you for keeping both girls completely in character - something that can be quite hard to do. They do seem like the perfect match, River and Luna, don't they? I love it how you played off that, and you did it so well. The ending is brilliant, too, it's almost like the whole thing happened in River's mind, and when she replied by saying "the moon" ...simply genius. This is one of my favourite fanfiction pieces I've ever read; I can't thank you enough for sharing this! (And I'm definitely gonna send this around to some fellow fans!)
Wake-up Soon
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
I liked this. I could see it happening .. bizarrely. Very In Character for both River and Luna. I really enjoyed it! XD
Anna.x.(:
Karg42
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
Interesting description of Luna's mind. It fits. Great fic-lit.
Obscure Stranger
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
I really like this... Do you think that you will ever write more of this? If not, It was great.
Creator-Chaos
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Made me smile. :) They are very similar.
Alexander Ripley
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
A wonderful story :)
AndrAIaRose
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
I think you did a wonderful job capture both Luna and River in this fic. Their speach patterns were dead on and so were their manerisms. Its hard to do, but made easier - I think - by the fact that it was so short. Perfectly short, in a good way. Probably one of the best fics I have read in a long while. You should think about doing a longer Firefly/Harry Potter crossover ;3 .
sirius 4-ever and a day
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Lol, that was too funny!
Farmer Joe-Gothic Fairy
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
awesome
SailorNeo
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
Wow. This was really interesting. The idea of having the two meet never occured to me. Having Drusilla and Luna or Dru and River meet, yes, but never Luna and River. Excellent last line.
Kay
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
This was really well written. You seemed to capture the character's personalities well.
i liked the last line :)
Audrey
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
Honestly. I wen looking for Harry Potter cross-overs and I saw that there were four in Firefly, and the pairing just seemed incredibly odd. I expected... I don't know, ridiculous, but this is great. Thanks.
Moon Ecstasy
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
That was brilliant! Man it would be awesome if Luna went to the Firefly-verse for a longer amount of time.
Cheers to you!!
*alerting it, just in case*
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