hm this is interestin update soon ^^

How strange.. But very good. Lol, he does have one or two inappropriate thoughts during fighting though! :)

Ahem, I shall fix my last review.

The scene between Johnny and Scorpion with the ropes really wasn't that OOC, because well it didn't feel that way. The only reason I really thought that was because, well you mentioned it and going off the move-verse it kind of was, but it also really wasn't.

Well whatever it was it didn't feel OOC till I thought of it, otherwise I thought it oddly in character, like if this was what really happened in the movie they would've acted like that. I don't know, but whatever that scene was it was all around awesome.=D

OMG! YOU DESERVE HUGS!

Lotsa hugs, because though I do find this story odd...(Scorpion and Johnny? Whoa!) I have to say I love it and want more of it.=D

I swear if it was physically possible I would molest this story, lock it in my bedroom and NEVER EVER let it go.

But ahem, enough of my obsessing.

I really, really like this story as you can tell, the Scorpion/Johnny had never occurred to me before and it both makes me laugh and get all tingly every time I think of it. It's so weird and yet, yet I love it and want more of it. Of course though the movie is NOT slashy at all I have to now see it through slash goggles, because I've been seeing a lot of movies through slash goggles lately.

Transformers for instance...and Batman for another...and many, many others for EVEN more. So what the heck, I say bring it on, and give me MORE! But whatever, I like your ficcy, Johnny's sense of humor is entertaining, and Scorpion's ninjaness is rocking, though a little improbable. But what the heck, tis a ninja! Ninja skills are sacred and should never truly make sense nor be explained because they rock that hard, seriously.

Particularly Scorpion and his freaky freakishness.

<3 My love for the weird and quirky shalt never end and shall do nothing but expand after the reading of this fic.

Then the scene with Johnny and the ropes and Scorpion...can we say river of drool? I was starry eyed forever after that, then I wanted more because I thought that was a pretty cool scene and well it rocked my socks. Of course it was only to find that MORE Scorpion/Johnny goodness doesn't exist.

So I re-read your story to get my new addiction fix, then I re-read it again...and yeah...I've officially lost my mind.

Either way I have to say your ahem scene of molestation was one of the better I've read, though OOC I cannot help but tremble before the gloriness of it.

Hm...can't think of much else. I do apologize for the stalkerish and fangirlish review but I also admit that it cannot be helped, the awesome of this ficcy blinded what little sanity I had and took over this review.

Well till next time, whenever that is...till then I shall wait and obsess and do all sorts of odd things as per fangirl habit.

:3

Hahah. The 'kissing is out of question' part made me laugh SO hard XDD
And I don't have much else to say. I just want to know what happens next.

Poor (?) Johnny; I look forward to the next chapter.

Lol, very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens now! :)

Wow! XD Hehe, this has to be the best chapter of them all~ <3 I almost half expected Scorpion to rape him with his hand-snake! *laughs wickedly* Amazing story, keep it up!

You're so awesome ;__; This has got to be one of the best fics I've ever read! I hope you never stop writting, because your stuff is addictive! XD Update soon!

Can't wait for the next chapter

The moment I saw RATING CHANGE I knew this was gonna be good. It was. Is.

Is it sad that I laughed through most of this even though I should've probably been more concerned for Johnny? I think it is, but there were some lines that I seriously couldn't stop snickering at, despite the seriousness of the situation (as serious as it gets when you realise you're gonna get raep'd by a ninja).

ANYWAY. I totally feel ya on the "I’m not allowed to change movies as I see fit". I shouldn't even be allowed to /see/ some movies because of what I end up thinking, and it freaks my brother out (it's actually his fault that he asks, right? ..right?).

Anyway, back to the story. If there's one thing I really like about the way you write, it's the way you write your stories so that even when you claim they're majorly OOC, it still feels very plausible for the characters to act the way they do. MK is the kind of movie that even 11-year olds can watch without taking seriously and get all hyped up 'cause of the violence (when you're 11, it doesn't matter if it's blood & gore, just blood, or just ass-kicking) but I'm sure that in an awesome world, something like this would be happening behind the scenes. I mean, you've got the good guys trying to save the world and the bad guys with their deviant ways, trying to take over. Emphasis on 'deviant'.
I would definitely not be surprised if I found out that the bad guys have got all sorts of nasty/weird/kinky habits. In my head, you've just put into words what MK in that R-rated world would be like.

Also, I keep feeling like I'm just praising you and I almost wish I had some actual critique; I dunno, it would feel like a more complete comment? I'll find something eventually.

On a completely random note, this chapter of the story made me want to have pancakes. Write more soon, you've got me wondering what's gonna happen next (this is a trend, with your stories).

Okay, I admit I'm having a bit of a dilemma here. On the other hand I can well understand how precious reviews are in a small fandom, but on the other hand, it's not on to leave a review consisting solely of "Guh". :D

I'm in love with this story on so many levels. The characterisations are great, giving Johnny more depth while still keeping him the same in appearance and possessive stalker Scorpion is definitely firmly in the "guh..." territory.

The writing style is nicely flowing with very immersive descriptions with lots endearing little details thrown in among Johnny's internal monologue. The fight scenes are very well narrated and choreographed, something I think is a sign of genius. It's obvious who is doing what, with enough description to make it interesting but still action packed and fast paced to make it feel like the real thing.

And all I can say for chapter four while still remaining in the realm of decency is that it's damn hot and hitting all of my kinks perfectly.

Please update soon!

Aw sweet! I loved that fight scene! I couldn't write that kind of fight scene in all my life! That was just...awesome! Update sooner!

You write fighting very well! Good chapter! :) (It's ages since I watched the movie T.T)