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asga 12/23/05 . chapter 3
please continue this
asga 12/22/05 . chapter 1
please continue this i love the story a lot
Feisty Feline Feral 8/30/04 . chapter 3
sorry for the late review, greta story so far_ i really hope there's more coming soon. Try adn make longer chapters next time.
Mistress of Ice 2/20/03 . chapter 1
i love it!please continue!
curse of the wolf 6/11/02 . chapter 3
goooooooooooooooooooodd write more
schtroompf 6/8/02 . chapter 3
OH MAN! I ADORE YOUR STORY! AMI IS MY FAVORITE SCOUT!

I sure hope some romance will happen between Zach and Ami! _

Her attitude change well... kinda in America fits her REALLY well! Great job!

HURRY UP with the next chapter so I can enjoy myself _
jenn 5/31/02 . chapter 1
I loved your story, please finish...
Story Oracle 1/21/02 . chapter 3
I love your story! Please Please write more!
kaze no beru 12/13/01 . chapter 3
hey, not bad. going pretty well. i really like Mars blowing up *snicker* anyway looking for more
Cat's Meow 12/12/01 . chapter 3
I like, I like. More...!
Sad Angel 12/6/01 . chapter 1
Great fic keep up ur good work...more more more please
PinaPoe 12/1/01 . chapter 1
aww man thas all? c'mon write some more!
Cat's Meow 12/1/01 . chapter 1
That was pretty different. Usually in many fics Sailor Moon comes to the scene late, and receives a severe dressing-down from other Senshi. This time Mercury was one being dressed down. Whoa! And what an attitude Ami has! But I am not certain if I like her new attitude or not... ; I prefer her more gentle nature. But anyways, your story rocks! I will look forward to more chapters later on.
Kaze no beru not signed in 12/1/01 . chapter 1
slightly OOC. but GOOO AMII! you ROCK! but somehow i don't see all the people ganging upon ami. Personally i would like to see serena makes amends and stuff, just to emphasize the situation, and don't see Ami saying that much, maybe just a "stiffly says' if that's your wishes' and walks away." even though i was like 'go! Ami, show them!' at that part of the fic, more interaction may be better. i don't know, these are just some suggestion, maybe i'm wrong ; hehe
I AM AMI 12/1/01 . chapter 1
go ami!go ami,go ami, go ami, go ami, go ami go! lol FINALLY ABOUT TIME...wat'll happen to ami?...ok can u please not try to make her such a bookworm...like change her appearance or make her interested in something other than computers...something no one would expect...something glamorous...
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