 Boisterous Hal 2009-05-04 . chapter 1Oh, I like this a lot. You put a very good twist into this, so well done. |
 sudoku 2009-01-13 . chapter 1I hope this's what actually happens but seems unlikely :(
It does not make sense that Nathan suddenly wants to turn every one in. It's a stretch for him to follow his father after all these years at the first place but changing side completely, that is a 180 degree turn. |
 marinawings 2009-01-13 . chapter 1interesting idea! i wondered if maybe this is what actually happened in the show... if you turn this into a full-blown story, i will definitely read it. |
 AJeff 2009-01-11 . chapter 1Yes, please make it into a longer story. Curious to find out what will happen with the Petrelli Brothers. Good job! |
 Lara-Van 2009-01-11 . chapter 1Ooh, we want to know just who it is inside Nathan! I never liked Nathan particularly, he was too much of a stuffed shirt, but at the same time I wasn't happy with the way his character went totally crazy-psycho-evil-let's-destroy-the-world-with-Daddy.
Nice explanation! |
 cookie-monster101 2009-01-11 . chapter 1i am so not happy nathan went all evil,someone has to have claimed nathan's body because that was just mean what he said to Peter >:( |