I like this story; you should continue it if you haven't already. It sounds promising.

That was pretty cool :)

The story is worth keeping and I shall remember it. 'Tis very beautiful. Do not allow such a gift to be forgotten. YOur story is smooth and flowing with a subtle rythem. I hope that you will continue this story some other time. Perhaps a tale of another time?

This is wonderful. Are you going to finish it? If not, may I?

Wow. Words have escaped me. That was an absolutely haunting, wonderful, beautiful piece of writing. I don't think you need to add more to this, really. It's perfect as it is.

That is so pretty...I love it...what happens next?

i think this story was beautful thanks for writing it! the angel was perfict you are great!

Not bad, not bad at all

Utterly beautiful and haunting tale. I was engrossed from beginning to end. It's otherworldly, lyrical and highly enjoyable in a weep-to-feel-good kind of way. Rare as it is I have little to complain about. Maybe a little more insight into Maria's death...but that's splitting hairs. Great job. Wish to see more.

This was pretty abstract but in a good way I think.

Are you going to add more to this? That would be great! This is really good!