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Neomage
2009-07-14 . chapter 5
(blood leaking from nose)

All I can say is, THAT is a very original use for the Clima-tact. Nice! :-D
Rabukurafuto
2009-05-09 . chapter 5
That was a cute and sexy ending. It is obvious that Robin can use her powers for naughty purposes, but the creative use of the Climatact was a nice touch. It was over all too soon, but it was a nice little voyage while it lasted.

I should write a few One Piece stories. Perhaps in the future...
Rabukurafuto
2009-05-09 . chapter 4
It was nice that Nami and Robin came to understand each other, but it felt too neat and easy. I would like for there to be more drama and conflict in there. Also, is this story spread out over a long timeframe? One chapter has them on the Going Merry and this one has them on the Thousand Sunny. It seems a bit much to swallow that Nami and Robin would be playing such a game for so long.
Rabukurafuto
2009-05-08 . chapter 3
A sexy and tense chapter. It was great seeing Robin and Nami play around with each other, and Robin revealed herself to be both erotic and dangerous. Poor Nami, she might be in over her head. The only problem is that these chapters are too short.
Rabukurafuto
2009-05-08 . chapter 2
This was a short but amusing chapter. Luffy giving himself a pair of large breasts sounds like something D.C.'s Plastic Man would do. The thought of Robin having a crush on Luffy, Usopp, or Chopper of all people is hilarious to contemplate. Sanji appearing to gleefully serve drinks while Robin is about to discuss the horrors of slavery is more subtle, but still funny. Of course, we have Robin indirectly letting Nami know that Nami is the one Robin has feelings for, but Nami doesn't quite beleve it yet. You know it's true, Nami! Open your eyes!
Rabukurafuto
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
This looks to be a cute story. I am glad to see that there is at least a little Robin/Nami girls love on FanFiction. If only there were more sexy stories of these two...

Anyway, you do a good job of capturing Nami's vivaciousness and Robin's cool. Luffy's Cloudcucooland citizenship is summed up well for the brief moment he is there, and Usopp's goofy nature spot-on. Nami's desire to connect with her elder crewmember is sweet, and I can feel her disapointment that Robin didn't take the orange.

I like this story a lot so. I'll be continuing it.
elfspirit7
2009-03-26 . chapter 5
WOW nice! Thanks for the read, can't wait to read your future fanfics XD!
Alexander Ripley
2009-03-20 . chapter 5
A lovely fic. You the crew very well. The romance between Nami adn Robin was very sweet.
And Luffy was hialrious."Gomu gomu no Breast Inflation!" Lol I can easily see him doing something like this.
Enigma
2009-02-07 . chapter 5
Great chapter, update soon!
spriterx
2009-01-30 . chapter 4
Good chapter:)
Enigma
2009-01-30 . chapter 4
Great chapter, I hope you will update soon!
sodacat95
2009-01-29 . chapter 3
Your story is awesome i hope you continue.Are they gonna hit land soon becasue it would be hard to avoid he problem when you have to see it everyday. Hope you continue soon you don't find alot of nami and robin stories. This is a good story and i felt really bad for poor Nami at the end please continue soon. eithter here or on just please do it soon not that i mean to rush or anything. Doesn't either chopper or robin wonder where eh scar on Nami arm under the pinwheel came from becasue i mean she did stab her arm so she should have some scars or from the abuse by arlong soemthing. yeah so great story.
spriterx
2009-01-25 . chapter 3
Very good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next:)
Suggestions
2009-01-25 . chapter 3
Nice! So long time since I read something as accurately written. I like the atmosphere it gives off. I'll wait patiently for the next chapter!

sorry if there's any spelling error. I'm a spanish-reader n.nU
spriterx
2009-01-17 . chapter 2
Very good story:)
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