A great story. Very well written.

I think it's kind of cute. The end at least. Edward's so sweet.

I keep coming back to this story, and showing my friends because it's just so awesome! It's great and I'm glad you wrote it. When I first read it it made my day, and everytime after that. Thnx!

I read this. Hilarity ensued. And if Clint Eastwood isn't an option. Is Marty McFly? That's my only query about this story

I pick Clint Eastwood! haha! It reminded me of that kids' book If You A Mouse A Cookie. YAY for you!

ribbit!

haha that's awesome! I love it! :D More please!

Hee! That was really cute. Thanks for posting it!

LOL I love the way you wrote it!

Love it! The style was good too. Really tho- such a day could only happen to Bella

Wow, I absolutely LOVED IT! It made me laugh out loud, I think it made my sisters realize I was weird, oh well, lol. ;) This is definately going to my favorites! :D

*Mimi-Love-4Ever

Haha I found it quite humorous. Now I know to never poke a vampire in the eye. Thanks for the public service announcement.

Now, where's my cookie? :]