Oh I love this fic so very much! Few stories remember that Susan most likely was trained to fight, even if she did not like it. Plus the relationships between the siblings was amazing and well put out. I thought that the bath scene between Peter and Susan was cute and romantic. And Lucy drunk was wonderful. Mostly because it shows that she is not perfect and she can have romantic feelings and be jealous. This is an amazing story!

I really luv this story! I especially like the ed/lu scenes ^_^ Ihope you update soon.

I Like this a lot, it's very Good. I hope we well see more from you soon!

I do Not went Susan to go! Edmund and Lucy were Good. Thank You.

Wow, I did not see that comeing. I too do not trust the Terebinthians.

It Very Good so far, I must say.

Excellent! Just really, really fantastic. Much higher quality of writing than I expect from most fanfiction. I enjoyed the whole thing.

LOVE IT!
LOVE IT!!
LOVE IT!
I LOVE how the Terebinthians tried to outwit the Narnians!! I LOVE how Susan was so locked in the middle of the struggle, and yet the King thought himself above them all?!! AWESOME!

And the hints of Peter/Susan and Edmund/Lucy are GREAT! Will there be more stories like this?? I'd think you'd do quite well with them, if you did!! LOL

I especially, LOVE Susan's desire to go East and explore with Aslan always within her and beside her!

POST MORE FICS ASAP!
Love ya,
Sam