Aw, poor Ray. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's awesome.

I liked this chapter, I really don't have anything constructive this time, as I'm in a slump, but... Keep up good work!

where's the next one?? hahaha... it's great really great...


hm...

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nice story...

hm... kai is being well.. kai... and umm... hehehe... the atmosphere is getting a bit... oh i don't now... near hell-like maybe??

heheh but it's another good chappy

“Well, I couldn’t leave a damsel without a date when he looks so beautiful,” Kai teased. Rei felt his cheeks heat up.

aw... it's so sweet... hehehe...

Oh no sweetie! *hug* I'm so sorry! I hope things start going right soon, for you and me both!

On the other hand, this was an absolutely amazing chapter, so at least something is going right! Poor Rei- Poor Tala! These boys just need to work it out and get together :P I love your writing.

And how /do/ you say you are a grapefruit in spanish? XD

Woah, this just got interesting!

great chapter. I'd forgotten about that fic for a while now. =]

“If I have to listen to them babble on any longer I think I’ll start banging my head against the table.”

so like ray...

very interesting indeed ...

its ok ** happens but please update soon please

wow. things are getting interesting. can't wait to see what happens with the party and if rei gets in trouble or not. hopefully max is feeling better too. and when is zeo going to be informed thet mystel wants him?

another successful chapter "THUMBS UP"

I hate interruptions when the story is getting hot...

Another great chapter :D. Update soon ^^