Great story. Where is the second part?? I got to the end and prepared to hit the button for the second chapter when I realized there was none.

Great writing and it really got me into the scene. Thanks for the post and hope you'll update it soon!

-BG

I really enjoyed this. Pretty awesome.

This was absolutely lovely! I adore your writing style, and
I am influenced by it. Please, please write the second part!

I'm begging you!

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Awesome!

[/ vanish in a puff of smoke ]

Oh This is getting good PLZ PLZ PLZ update...Or I'll cry.

Ami: Oh god Plz ANYTHING but her crying

hope u update soon! i want to see what happens.

Hope you update it soon! Im probably one of the few who actually like this couple. I find ti really cute and hot so please update it!

Don't do it Hiashi...He's just a child just think what will happen to you when the village finds out if you rape him...It's wrong...Update soon!

Update soon!Can't wait to see what happens next

Oh please update! You wouldn't be cruel to leave the story in that part! :D This is my first time with the pairing and I must say...I'm convinced. Maybe it's your writing, but damn! it's hot :D

I like how you work with the implicit dangerous aura when Neji was so close to press Hiashi's chakra point fatally. It just made this reading even more arousing. I also like the way you portrayed the characters: Neji is very perceptive but still 'innocent' and Hiashi is... well, Hiashi. He is the Lord. Neji will be screaming his name :D

Good work. Can't wait to read part II.

HI HOW GOES IT I LOVED THIS FANFIC YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER PLZ WRITE MORE

HI I LOVED THIS SO MUCH IT IS SO HOT SO PLZ WRITE PART 2 IM DYING TO READ IT. OH YA YOU DID VERY WELL ON THIS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

please update...

Omg, a Hiashi/Neji Romance fic! I've been looking for one but they're so rare...
Please update!

Ok, wow!! I have to say I thought this pairing was a little odd at first, but omg...that was HOTT!! lol. Anyway, please write more!! Can't wait to see part 2!