That's cute.

marvelous subtle sense of place and character.lexy

Ohmigosh, this is sublime. Just sublime. Your characterizations of both Severus and Remus are spot on and naturally I love those two together. Kudos on this.

Well...a small pup who shows gratitude would be easier to deal with than many of the students, I expect. Very nice!

that was super cute~!! the three last lines were just perfect!
aw snape with a puppy.

what a lovely story. loved it. good job. continue your writing, please!