I really enjoyed your story. Very sweet.

i just sat and read the whole thing - great story - a sequel would be good to - hint hint :-)

thanks!

I just stumbled across this wonderful story. I even stayed up very late to finish reading the whole thing because I couldn't tear myself away from it. Your writing and humor are most excellent and I applaud you! Keep writing!! :D

I read your story today: A friend recommended it and it made my day. At some point I had to take a breather: my abs were hurting so much from laughing and I had tears rolling down my face. Thank you lots for this!
stef

Oh, I loved the ending. This was a fun read! I love how you wove everything together, it was excellent. Thanks so much!

One of the funniest fart scenarios I've read. Thanks for the laughs.

Okay. This chapter was even funnier than chapter 3. It had me LMAOFOTF. One of the things I don't like about Janet's later books is the humor geared towards 13-year-old boys. I'm not usually into fart humor, but this was fart humor done right! It was hysterical!

You know, I almost skipped this chapter because when I realized it would be about Steph cooking dinner, I thought it would be boring. I'm so glad I didn't! It is one of the funniest things I have ever read.

I absolutely loved your story. This was hands down the most humorous,I laughed out loud at least once every chapter, sweetest, Ranger teaching her to take better care of herself and always being there for her, saddest, Her "boyfriend" never once asking her how she was doing...well, you get where I'm going. I ran through every single emotion that I have and couldn't wait for more. *secret* I printed off some pages of your story so that I could hide them under my papers at work so I could continue reading. Thanks you, Thank you for your wonderful story.

this chapter literally had me laughing out loud! Great chapter!

I had a really good time reading this story. Funniest line? For me it was "If you had any brains, you wouldn’t be making Supercop dinner. You’d be making Batman breakfast.” But the best was the million dollar answer. Well done!

OMG I HAVE JUST FOUND A NEW COMEDY STORY WRITER THAT WAS THE BEST!

I absolutely loved this story! The characterization was great, and the humour! I haven't laughed like that in a very long time. Thank you for a very entertaining story. :)

I love the way you write! The story was great with lots of humor (I found myself laughing out loud!) and some smut!
I'm waiting for the next story! Hope you write one soon!!

This was an excellent story, and a joy to read. It's obvious you put a lot of thought into every chapter and special kudos for the spot-on characterization. Keep up the good work in anything else you write!