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KiT72
2009-11-02 . chapter 3
cool~ this is certainly interesting... you put just the right amount of drama... so it feels really light and easy to read... :) and I'm quite fond of your writing style... :D so keep it up!! and yeah,,i know you updated like 10 months ago but i just got into soul eater recently and saw sparks between Marie and Stein... :D anyway, i hope you update! :)
ToastWeaselofDOOM
2009-04-24 . chapter 3
Aw... I feel so bad for Marie... especially how she loved Joe and then he just dumped her while she still loved him... and then what happened at the end... tragic, tragic...

As usual, you write them amazingly well. ^^ I like Joe, despie how he broke Marie's heart. ^^

Spirit-kun, Justin-kun, Stein-kun, Marie-chan... ah, they're all so awesome. ^^

Are you going to update this? I really like it and hope there will be more. ^^
ToastWeaselofDOOM
2009-04-24 . chapter 2
Aw, poor Marie!

I love Shinigami-sama. XD You write him wonderfully as well. ^^

Very good! Love Spirit too. XD

And, of course, Stein!
ToastWeaselofDOOM
2009-04-24 . chapter 1
*please ignore my happy fangirl squeegal again* *coughs awkwardly* Ahem. Yay, once again for Stein and Marie! ^^

You write them so WELL! It's amazing. ^^ I really love all your fics with them... gah, you're awesome!

I think my favorite line in this fic was this was:
'Kickball wasn't the "team building activity" teachers made it out to be. It was a popularity contest. Only a simpleton couldn't see it.' God, this is SO true... I'm almost ALWAYS picked last in kickball, so I know what Stein's talking about.

Yay for Stein and Marie! ^^
sexypancake
2009-04-16 . chapter 3
This story is really good. I hope you update soon please! :D
Kanae92
2009-03-15 . chapter 3
The recollection of memories is quite amazing! i'm not into Joe and Marie together but now that arrival to Stein kun has begun i'm happy! :D
Haladflire65
2009-02-10 . chapter 3
Very interesting indeed. Great portrayal of Stein and Marie as kids. I like it. Keep up the good work.
abraXcadabra
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
HAI LOVAH!

..See, I TOLD you I read your stuff. This is just the first time I've reviewed for a while. Uh, heh?

That was rly cute. Just so you know. That Azusa girl sounded mean, though. Of course I wouldn't know, because I don't actually read Soul Eater, but... -sweatdrop- YOU KNOW WHAT I'M ON ABOUT.

I'm nao a fan of this pairing and I hardly know who the characters are. 8D

I can't wait to see how we (-cough-mostlyyou-cough-) manage L/Marie footsies at Kawa Kon... XD
Victoria Levi
2009-01-27 . chapter 3
I like it so far, I do look forward to updates. :D Yay!
dementedViolinist
2009-01-26 . chapter 3
Wah, damn you Joe, dumping Marie-chan like that! But at least now she gets to go back to Stein...
I love this sentence: "Everything was perfect, lovely, rose-colored." It's so beauutifully descriptive.
dementedViolinist
2009-01-26 . chapter 2
Aw, poor Marie-chan! She's so in love with Stein.
Spirit-senpai will hit on just about anything in a skirt :D
Nenena
2009-01-26 . chapter 3
...These just keep blowing me away.

There's so, so much that I love about this one. I adore the way that you wrote Marie and Joe's relationship. You have so many amazing little turns of phrase. This is probably going to sound stupid, but I just love your style of prose, and how you change it to fit the subject matter of each of these fics.
The Pumpkin Queen
2009-01-25 . chapter 3
Poor Marie at the end. Hope going back to Death City will do her good. x)
ace.striker
2009-01-25 . chapter 3
Ah, I loved this chapter! You're really great with Marie's character and I like what you did with her and Joe's relationship. =)
Cantare
2009-01-13 . chapter 2
I like the succinctness of this chapter. Shinigami is portrayed very well, I like his quirkiness. Marie's determination to be Stein's weapon is so cute, and I felt disappointed that she got sick and couldn't make it to the ceremony. She's very pure of heart and not selfish like her mother says. I like how you added the detail that she was happy for Stein because he was trying to better himself, and she didn't retain bitterness toward Spirit.

Looking forward to the next installment.
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