i love it

excellent

That was great. Is the grey lady Ginny or Hermione? Update soon.

Oh! that's 'Mione!

Sarah

Interesting start here. Looks to be a rather unusual story and the rest will be quite intriguing as well, I'm sure. Good writing.

hey great chapter update soon

to be honest i wasnt sure if id like this story but now that ive started to read it im entranced i cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work

Aww. How wonderfully sweet. A great and curious beginning to the story. I am eager to see more of it!

another great start to what I hope would be a great story pls update asap

I'm looking forward to this one.

Not a bad start to the story mate, I can't wait to see what you have planned next, update soon...