Short, but very well-written and kind of sweet...or bittersweet. I found this after I wrote my own SasoDei fic, though it kind of explores the same concept. If Sasori is a human puppet, it seems unlikely to me that he'd be able to have sex in the normal way, or experience orgasm, or anything like that.

hello!

I'm not speak english bust your fic is beautiful!

I want to ask your permission to translate the Spanish fiction

thanks!

I love it, it's so beautiful!

Well now THAT is a really good story. I really don't mind Sasori and Deidara having sex in fan fiction (actually, I love it), but in Naruto universe it doesn't make much sense. Most authors don't even bother to find and explanation for them having sex, which I find extremely annoying. I'm really full of admiration for this story of yours, even though it's pretty short.

This story is sheer poetry. It captures both characters and their relationship exactly. Be very very very proud.

Very interesting view.

It's really good and believable but sad D= Poor Sasori T_T