Whoa! I ... oh man have no words! I really hope that you plan on continuing this!!

It's a very captivating beginning, I really want more! :3

Fantastic work! X3

Wow, that was so utterly depressing, but so good to read. It was just so sad. I could feel Don's wild desperation at not wanting Raph to see and Leo struggling with him while still in shock himself. I can totally see Raph's reaction perfectly. It all played out so well in my mind's eye and just so tragic. You did a great job at really making the story jump out at the reader. I guess the Ouroboros Complex is supposed to be representing the cycle of life here? Or, is it implying that the spirit of Michelangelo is like Ouroboros-- like his love for life can't ever be erased--type thing? Well, I guess it could go either way and either way, I really love the story even if it is terribly depressing. Thanks for writing and posting it!

Mikey, no!
That was just, wow *bows to your awsomeness*XD I felt like I was there watching it all happen and experiencing it all, your are a truely gifted writerXD I really can't wait to see what happens nextXD

God that was intense...I don't know how you did it. For all that happened and the responses to the situation, this could have very easily fallen into lame melodrama if handled by the wrong writer, but DUDE! Not even close to melodrama. This was just...painful. It hurt in all the right ways. I just sat here and read through this twice because of how *right* it felt to read. I'm crying inside right now, and I hanging on with everyone else, waiting to find out what will happen next.

Amazing work. So very awesome.

you know, everyone says that shredder is their archenemy, i actually think it's bishop. after all, shredder just wants to kill them, bishop wants to do just what happened here. all the reactions were perfect. i hate that you killed mikey though :(

Whoa... I'm looking forward to more!

Fantastic 1st chapter, you've successfully drawn me in and wanting more.

OK dude you better have a good reason for mikey dieing
any way i like it
update soon!

An extremely powerful start to the story. I can't wait to read more of this.

MIKEY! I'm in with Raph on this one! Very well-written, very intense, very in character. Excellent! And I'm so sad now. Can't wait for more!

This was so heart breaking. What was done to Mikey just sounds so horrible, especially since we all know that Mikey probably has a fear of exactly this happening to him. I'd expect such reactions from the brothers. I can't wait to see where you take this story though. A part of me hopes it will be happy.

D: Awesomely, horrifyingly brilliant. The imagery is profound, and I like how it comes across disjointedly to go with the trauma of the scene. Very, very nicely done. As usual.

Well crap, now I got tears in my eyes. While watching the Golden Globes with mom. xD shes going to look over here and ask, ONCE AGAIN, why I am so sad while on the computer. I swear, I cry at everything minutely sad, even more when there is a death. Thankfully, I was able to hold back. If I was alone though I could(would) let it all out.

I am interested to see where this goes, if you will go to the future and we get to see how the boys deal without Michelangelo (which is something I would to see from you, done by a writer who can actually WRITE) or if we will go into the past and see what the hell happened. Or maybe start right where we left off, them getting out there hopefully with the dead body of their fallen brother so they can give him a proper burial.

My god, I was so glad when I saw that you had entered a new story. I have been looking all week for something new and fantastic and I knew once I saw your name that you were sure to deliver.

I really cant wait to see more and I hope you update soon because I am so excited to read more.

~~Tauni

ok dude, this is well written but soo wrong on soo many different levels. how could you kill Mikey? the baby, the heart and humor of the family? serious killjoy here. :( i love a good drama, but geez. now what? will be waiting.