OMG... what can i say. Keith would have to be one of my all time favorite movies and u wrote it perfectly. Reading this fan fiction, it almost felt like i was watching this on dvd. You captured all the right emotions. You're truely an amazing writer and i can't wait to see what else you come up with. Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this...

I cried in the movie when she told him that she want to be with him and the airport scene with JESSE ACTING SKILLS and jçyour story make me fall in love again with this storyy i was willing to find this point of view and I'm glad i find it thank to u this is on of my fav. movies and i'm gonna buy too.

a fanmade video i made in honor to this amazing movie

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hey, i just read this story, it's amazing, you really shoudl be proud of this story.

the grammer everything was good. i look forward to reading more of your stories.

(p.s i have an account i just cant log in at the mo)

Wow,loved every word. love the movie too.

hey! i decided to start reviewing this story as well! even though you're done it now, i still thought you may appreciate the reviews. i really enjoyed this movie, and i was glad to see a familiar author on the fanfiction page for it! well, great chapter!

P.S. i was too lazy to sign in. so i just nicknamed myself my username:)

I was (almost) bawling my eyes out. The story is sad, and then, the way you got into his psyche was great and everything made sense. The airport scene is one of my favorites and you made it more emotional.

GREAT JOB!

~KARLA

Another great end to another great story. I swear, I'v looked through all my comments to you, and I can't find a single negative one. NOT ONE! And every single one of them told you the truth- that you have a gift for writing. Seriously, you could pursue this as a career. I am priveliged to have read your work.
Your very happy fan,
Roses of the Night (yeah, I changed my name. I still love twilight, but I'm not as obsessed w/ it)

So sad that it's the last chapter, but you did a wonderful job with it. I think by far, the last chapter was one of my favorites. The way you wrote it matched perfectly with the movie, so much that I can picture it clearly in my head.
Again, I'm sad that it's over but where a story ends, another begins. ;)

That was AMAZING! The goodbye scene is one of my favorites from the movie and you did such a great job capturing Keith's emotions and Natalie's as well! I absolutely love the end, where at first he wasn't going to kiss her back, but then he did; I loved that part!

I am excited to know that you have more Keith's oneshots and chapter fic ideas. I really hope you write more Keith stories. :) Thank you so much for writing this!

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I can't believe it's almost over! This was a really sad chapter. My favorite part was "Keith said nothing but tightened his grip on her and thought. Me too, partner, me too." It was a bittersweet moment. Update the rest soon!

~KARLA

OMG! That was amazing. I love the way you showed how hard it was for Keith to be rude to Natalie, and how every time he was rude he wanted to go back to her. I loved this chapter! I can't wait for the next one. I wish this story didn't have to end!

You know, I'm dissapointed. I expected so much more out of that story... NOT. THAT WAS FaNtAsTiC. Nuff said. I have been waiting for this chapter for a LoNg tImE and I am very pleased. I had no doubts that you could write the most (or 2nd most) intense scene from the movie and leave me speechless and teary-eyed. I was right again!

keep going! i wanna know what happens

I liked the chapter a lot! My favorite scenes are when Natalie tells him that she loves him and the airport scene.

~KARLA

Love the father son moment- *tear tear*. The confrontation scenes in the movie are my fave too (besides the "picnic" scene, but I think I already rold you that. My memory's shot). I especially liked the beginning of this chapter- I love all your added Keith scenes. By the way- thank you for updating so quickly!