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Mad Server
2009-12-07 . chapter 13
That was intense and delicious.
IheartSam7
2009-12-07 . chapter 13
wow. double dose of hurt brothers. Lovely.
Enkidu07
2009-12-06 . chapter 13
Welcome back! I missed you! Very poignant and pretty even with its somber subject! Classic.
Onyx Moonbeam
2009-12-06 . chapter 13
You break my heart a bit. FYI. Nice you're back from a break!
Mad Server
2009-06-16 . chapter 12
Is this while Dean is dead? I love that the compass is too dirty to read. It's a great image for how (emotionally?) lost Sam is.
Onyx Moonbeam
2009-06-16 . chapter 12
Nice fresh stitch description. It's such an interesting scene. Neat to come up with so many reasons he'd be stuck there, but mostly, Dean WOULD be back. Nice that he's so sure of his brother.
1983Sarah
2009-06-15 . chapter 12
Sounds like survival training gone bad. Good thing we all know that Dean will save him.
bhoney
2009-06-14 . chapter 12
Oh, really intriguing. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this...
Enkidu07
2009-06-14 . chapter 12
Hang on, Sam!

Dean is coming!

Beautiful imagery.
IheartSam7
2009-06-14 . chapter 12
UH, I kind of LOVED THAT. AWESOME!
Wingg-ed Wolf
2009-06-12 . chapter 8
I don't think such a short story has ever required me to reread it so many times, just trying to squeeze out as much information as possible. Just a 'wow'ing story, and so...

Captivating. I'm still going over it, wanting to know more!
Onyx Moonbeam
2009-04-29 . chapter 11
Oh poor poor Dean talking to Sammy. I definitely picture Sam having a running conversation with Dean while he was in hell. This makes so much sense to me too, Dean begging Sammy to come back.
Mad Server
2009-04-27 . chapter 11
Ouch. Great job conjuring up Bobby's awkwardness and Dean's grief after Sam's death.
InSecret
2009-04-26 . chapter 11
Oh OUCH. Great use of the word to, y'know, bruise my heart ;-)
IheartSam7
2009-03-22 . chapter 10
That was overwhelmingly beautiful. Filled with such raw emotion in such short words.
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