NEWT's not OWL's

Anyway I kept reading hoping the trials would get better or the writing would suddenly send my mind into overdrive.

I mean the idea itself is very intelligent and well thought out not to mention very original.

The writing itself was nevertheless rather disapointing.

Wow this is 1 of the best stories i've ever read! Hell i would put this story right next 2 JK's books on my fav book list!

Nice story. If you get a chance it could do with a through copy edit though. You've got a lot of spelling/grammar errors that detract from the story. :) Zafaran

great story please update soon!

Thye writing style is simple, but the story is really good. If you have an idea for a sequel I look forward to it.

oh! it was really really good! i lov e all your storys!

HAZZAGRIFF

shouldn't it be NEWTs not OWLs?

intresting.

intresting.

THATS DA BEST STORY IVE READ SO FAR BETTER DEN MINES! MY GOD U SHOULD MAKE LIKE ANOTHER STORY/BOOK ON DA SAME THING DOES LIKE WHEN DEY OUT OF HOGWARTS OR SOMMAT!WICKED!

kawai! . me like

really bad choice for an ending! i mean, come on! in one of the trials he refused to kill, utterly and completely and now he kills voldemort-he has now lost what he learned in the trials when he kills! he should have made it so voldemort could never harm again, like make him into a Muggle or something...or locked him away forever

I'm really impressed by this. like all your stories the plot was extremly origional. Your amazing and I look forward to more of your work. _

I now have read all off your chapters.

And I LOVED THEM ALL!

I really hope you will do some other stories.

Have a great Life!

1 That Story Was Great

2 Correction It Is Great

3 Yeah It Is Great Isn't It

4 Completely And Totally Great

5 Abnormally Great

::1-5 giving the effect of ditzy teenage girls::

6 Awwe, Come On Now, It Really Was It All That Great, Was It?

7 Yes, It Was Awsome, Phenomaly Great

8 No It Was Not Penomenal, It Was Great, But not Phenominal

9 It Was Not Great Or Phenominal, No, It Is Some Thing Else Entirely, I Just Cannot Place What-

10 Your Right, It's It's Ummm...

11 Ugh, It Was Original! That Is What It Was You Dolts, The Same Thing, But Original!

12 It Was Predictable and Stupid::sneered apraticularly nasty voice::A Totally Point Less. And A Waste Of Time To Read, And A Waste Of Good Cumputer Space

13 Nu Uh,::argued a particularly childish voice(The 13 Hit The 12 And Successfully Shut Him Up[If Inner Voices/Thoughts{I Don't Know really what To Call Them}Can Do That])::

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Okay

I'm Done Being Silly

I Think

Well

Just Wanted To Say

And To Make Sure

If You Ever Read This

Make You Atleast Read It All The Way Through

Ues I Was Being Stupid Up There Wasn't I?

Well This Story Is Great

But As My Voices Said Up There There Were Flaws

Yes

But

You Handled The Flaws Very Well

{Not Sure What She Ment By That}

But I Mean That In A Good Way

I Mean Lots Of The Authors Out There Have Bigger Flaws That Yours

Your Flaws In the Story Were Not Big At All Very Small Minor Flaws

I'm Not Even Sure What They Are

If There Is Or Is Going To Be A Sequal To This I Will Read It!

Any Way Great Story!

I Think This Review Is Getting A Bit Too long

Do You Agree?

Yes?

No?

I Thought So!

I'll End It Now Okay?

Goode-Bye!

The End!

Al Right

It's Finished

You Can Go

Yes

You At The Computer

Good-Bye!

All Done

Bye

Fine I Guess I'll Leave First Then Good-Bye

(Get's up and Leaves The Site By Clickin On The Big Blue Button That Say's 'Submit Review' At The Bottom Of The Box She Was Typing In And Effectively Ends The Connection)